She's gone!

She was there very often
by the side of the road
in my arms so close
nothing had I done
but she's gone

Many unanswered questions
Pop out like bubbles
On the roof in rainy season
No "Good Bye", No reason
She's gone

Her eyes, her smile
Oh god please!
Send her for a while
or she'll be writing..
"He's gone!"

 

 

yeah she's with me right now

good job. cliched as it would definitely sound like but they say: if you love someone, set them free. if they come back they are yours; if they don't, you are set free. HAHAHA

Loote, nice twist!  LOLz

Good one...tragic/lamentable verses

Please note...when the door of happiness closes, another opens but often times we look so hard at the closed door that we don't see the one which has been opened for us. It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

Keep on writing !!

LOL samsara! just playing around with few words. hope alls well at your end

nkc, well said my friend

daum, no disrespect to your feelings hai pheri! if it's a non-fiction, i hope she comes back and be yours forever

lovely poem...:)

I thought was this song..

i_nepali,
pretty close, no?

why don't you compose a tune for the daum's one. i believe you sing pretty well too. if not, i can do the honor HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Loot Bro, I wish I could do both - compose the melody and sing it but I can't. I think I will let you have the honour. I do hope that we can hear from you about the details soon.

that was a good one...

And hello i_nepali dai how are you doing.... where are you now.. if happen to go back to SG.. post more pic la... Miss GC so much.

Cheers!!

N_N

N_N, I am not in Sg now, my brother is so ask him. And ya I wish you Merry X-mas & Happy New Year. Hopefully, you can drop by Newcastle in the near future soon.

Not too sure when i_nepali Dai... currently I am in Romania.... White Xmas awaits me... I will post some pic when i get the chance,,, and I wish you Merry Xmas and A brilliant New year too... Regards to all in New Castle.

Take care.

N_N

kati ramro poem lekhnu bhako, daum jyu.

actually she is not gone, she is on hola hai. JPT.

i_nepali,
last i sang a song, was in my previous life. i was born as elvis presley . god is too cruel. he takes back the very thing  in your next life which made you popular in your previous life. .

now that i told u how i sing like, get ready for the torture. i need to think of a tune though.

right now i will start with G-minor

Very nice poem Daum!

but i couldn't stop giggling seeing looteK's comment