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 Until.. Never
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Posted on 01-09-08 8:42 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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This will be my last post here guys. Apparently theres not much comments going on what you think of my poems. So am guessing theres not much appreciation out there for them. Cheers anyway for reading them..

Until the sea evaporates and pours down upon heaven
Until the sun freezes and the moon is on fire
Until the end of time, Until the end of forever
This heart will love, it will rage with desire

Until the wind stops flowing through deep mountains
Until the sky shatters and the devil kneels down in fear
Until the stars stop twinkling, until the icy rivers melt and burn
These eyes will forever shine, whenever u come near

Until the light loses its way and fails to find the earth
Until the sun can shine no more, until there's absolute darkness
Until love stumbles and fails to light up another heart
This smile will always flow, it will transcend every sadness

I know not what lies beyond forever
or what happens when time stops moving
I just know till then and beyond
this heart of mine will never stop loving

- 7032junior
Last edited: 09-Jan-08 08:50 PM

 
Posted on 01-09-08 9:23 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Good one, Dude. Liked the way you have played with the words. Keep them coming, Man.
 
Posted on 01-10-08 1:44 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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thanks again biradhar.. Glad that u like it..

 


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