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 घर बाट मन्दीर टाढा छ साथी
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Posted on 12-10-08 3:02 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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घर उस्को फोहोर को कन्टेनर्, साथी गुडी रहेको बस
उमेर हेर्दा सानै छ, शायद भयो होला दस

मैला शरीर , ठेला परेका हात, फाटेका छन जुत्ता 
आज कन्टेनर् तीर बास छ उस्को भोली होला कता

भवीस्य को िचन्ता  छैन केवल वर्तमान मा छ बाचेको
भीत्री मन रोये पनी अनुहार देखीन्छ हासेको   

के दशै तीहार , के जन्मदीन , के बाल िदवस 
एक रुपैया िदन िहच्कीचाउने हामी कस्तो िववस

 पुन्य कमौन,े   र धर्म गर्ने ईच्छा छ, के के भेटी म चढाउ ?
घर बाट मन्दीर टाढा छ साथी , एउटा रोइ रहेको बच्चा लाई हसाउ

.........एउटा रोइ रहेको बच्चा लाई हसाउ




 
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जाउ समाउ, मानिस् हरुको पाउ,
मलम लगाउ आर्तहरुमा चाहराइ रहेको घाऊ

देबकोटा बाजेको कथन् जस्ताइ वाह! वाह ! वाह !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 
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वाह वाह ! गजब !

अलिकती चलाऊन मन लाग्यो !

के दशै तीहार , के जन्मदीन , के बाल िदवस 
एक रुपैया िदन िहच्कीचाउने हामी कस्तो िववस

के दशै तीहार , के बाल दिवस,  के जन्मदीन 
रात बल्ल तल्ल कट्यो भोली त फेरी उही दिन

 

 


 
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maja le chalaye huncha rithhe.  Huna ta yo kabita maile pahile nai lekhera aru forum ma post garya ho. Sajha ma chahi bharkhar release garya .   Ani thank you. Timro bhag pani add garya bhae ramro hune rahecha kabita ma.

Thank you rahulbhai. Sachi  kata kata devkota ko jasto po bhaecha. .  Huna ta afulai Devkota bhanya hoina  tara unconsciously inspire bhako chahi huna sakcha. But I never had Devkota in mind writing this poem.

Hawaa lai pani Dhanyabaad.



 
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>>घर बाट मन्दीर टाढा छ साथी , एउटा रोइ रहेको बच्चा लाई हसाउ<<

धेरै राम्रो - निकै राम्रो लाग्यो मलाई -
अरु पनि लेखौ अनी साझा मै ग्रान्ड प्रिमिएर गरौ


 
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"घर बाट मन्दीर टाढा छ साथी , एउटा रोइ रहेको बच्चा लाई हसाउ "
Superb!!

 
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सत्प्रयास!

 


 


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