Wow, another great piece. Thanks for sharing.  

Yakku,

Thank you very much for your generous comment. 

Dipika,

I am indebted for your inspiring words. Thank you very much, friend.  

Pjna,

Thank you very much for the inspiring words. I am glad that you liked this piece too.

 

Although I don't have answer for
all of life's problems, doubts, or fears.
But still I will listen to you,
feel your ache and wipe your tears.

हो त नि, ठिक भन्नु भयो तपाइले।  कस्तो राम्रो एक्स्प्रेसन।

म पनि यो कपेर च्याङ्बालाइ पठाँउछु है नेप्चे ज्यु?

उसले बुझेन भने भोटे भासामा उल्था गरिदिनु है ल?

CL ज्यु,

प्रशंसा का ति दुई शब्दहरु को लागी म आभार प्रकट गर्दछु। "एक्स्प्रेसन" मन परेको सुन्दा मलाई पनि खुशी लाग्यो। पढेर प्रतिकृया दिनु भएकोमा धन्यवाद छ।  
हाहाहा, च्याङबा लाई पठाउने रे? ल भै हाल्छ नि। अब उस्ले बुझेन भने पो गाह्रो पर्ने भो त। आफुलाई भोटे भाषा आउँदैन त।

Oh yeah, can I send this poem to my gf too? I am sure she will like it as she liked your last poem.

Nepal ko Chora...

If i were to be able to write like you. i could have easily made this girl fall for me again that once used to be my GF. I need a poem to make a bitter relationship work....

ChiBears

Nepal ko Chora...

If i were to be able to write like you. i could have easily made this girl fall for me again that once used to be my GF. I need a poem to make a bitter relationship work....

ChiBears

NKC, another nice one..kya ramro....:) Waiting for more..

Nice one.. Did ya write this? If yes then here is something for you

 

I can't give solutions to all of life's problems, doubts, or fears.
But I can listen to you, and together we will search for answers

I can't change your past with all it's heartache and pain,
nor the future with it's untold stories.
But I can be there now when you need me to care.

I can't keep your feet from stumbling.
I can only offer my hand that you may grasp it and not fall.

Your joys, triumphs, successes, and happiness are not mine;
Yet I can share in your laughter.

Your decisions in life are not mine to make, nor to judge;
I can only support you, encourage you, and help you when you ask.

I can't prevent you from falling away from friendship,
from your values, from me.
I can only pray for you, talk to you and wait for you.

I can't give you boundaries which I have determined for you,
But I can give you the room to change,
room to grow, room to be yourself.

I can't keep your heart from breaking and hurting,
But I can cry with you and help you pick up the pieces
and put them back in place.

I can't tell you who you are.
I can only love you and be your friend.

 Yakku,

I am glad to hear that your gf liked the earlier poem. And, if you think she will he happy again, then feel free dude. 

bears23,

I don't know what to say but it sounds kinda weird to me that the a poem can affect the relationship so deeply. You may be surprised to hear that I started writing when I was going through rough time in my life. Why don't you try writing something youself? I hope she will be happy to read something that comes out straight from your heart. I hope things will work out for you. Good luck !!

Sndy Dijyu,

Thank you very much for those encouraging note. I will try to bring more pieces in coming days.

Nepkanchhi,

Yeah, I had typed those lines couple of days ago.  

Your reply is simply awesome. Those are nicely decorated words. Good job. I feel rewarded to have those lines dedicated to me.  Looking forward to reading more from you.

A short thank you note for you...

Thank you for such a lovely gift;
Thing like that gives my spirit a lift.
I feel honored and it's my pleasure;
It’s your thoughtfulness that I treasure.

Thanks again !! 

Does it make you happy if I say ...I would like to dedicate above verses to you as well?  ::wink::

NKC, keep on writing bro, you've a wonderful writing skill. another nice one! Who is this for

नेप्चे पाट ल दाsssमि  गा' रइछ है
मलाई नि लव गरु गरु जस्तो लाग्यो यार यो कबिता पढेर त

Kanchha and Rithhe bro,

Thank you very much for boosting comments.

ओ हो नेप्चेभाइ  कइता त मजाओ रे'छ । मलै नि तिम्रो भेनालाइ चिटी लेकुम लेखुमलाओ तिम्रो कइता पढेर

लेख्दै जाऊ हामी पढ्दै जान्छौ है त ---:)

Nepche, thanks so much..

Your thank-you note is simply awesome

मिस दिदी,

हजुर को कुरा सुन्दा मलाई पनि खुसी लाग्यो। गुलियो शब्दको लागी धेरै धेरै धन्यवाद। लेख्नुस् न हजुर पनि, अनी हामी पनि पढ्ने।

Nepkanchhi,

You are most welcome. I am glad to hear that you found the "thank you note" awesome. Looking forward to reading more from you.

नेप्चे,
यो कबिताको खोलाँ अलि दिन भो बाढी आको छ आको छ --शिराँ को दर्क्यो प्रभो?

बाढी तर गडगडार आको छ लान्छ बगाएर कस्कस्लाई चैं --

 

 

मैले नि त्यहि भन्या दीप! बाढी नि फेरी सपै कुरा सोतर पार्ने गरेर आयो नि! अरुका कविताको बाढिले कि त प्रेमिका सोतर पार्थ्यो, कि त एक्लोपना इत्यादी, हाम्रो नेप्चेको कविताले त मेरिबास्सै प्रेमिका, घर, दाजुभाई, दिदी-बहिनी, आमा-बुबा सपै! खास बगाउन चाहिँ 'कोहि बिशेषलाई' खोज्या जस्तो छ है, तर यसो गाइँगुई केहि चल्यो भने 'ब्याकअप' जस्तो अरु कुरा नि समेटेको हो अरु कवितामा, बाठो छ ब्रो जे होस!

ल ल ब्रो पेलम पेलम!

कबिता त घच्चिकै रेछ। जस्को लागि लेख्या हो उनि चैनी घायल नै हुनी भयिन्।

दीप प्रभो, 
बाढी नै आको त हैन। पहिला देखी अर्को बाधमा जम्मा भको पानी यहाँ साझाको खोलामा आएर बगाइ देको मात्रा हो। त्यो बाध को ढोका अली बढी नै खोलिएछ कि क्या हो, बाढी आको भान भएछ। प्रभो को आगमन ले धागो को शोभा नै बढ्यो।

जिम्माल बा,
खाली एउटै रट लगायो भने सुन्नेहरु को कान पाक्ला कि भन्ने डर ले गर्दा यसो फरक-फरक बिषयमा खुराक पस्किने जमर्को मात्र हो, मेरो। त्यस्तो ब्यक्ती बिशेषलाई बगाउने अभिप्राय मेरो हैन। फेरी अहिले सम्म त्यस्तो कोही बगेको खबर त मैले पाको छैन । कोही बग्न राजी भए त असारे झरी नै पारीन्थ्यो होला नि।   मौका मिले अरु पनि पेल्दै गरम ला नि। यहाँ आएर २ शब्द पोखिदिनु भयो साह्रै खुसी लाग्यो।

तोरीको फूल,
तपाईंलाई कबिता घच्चिको लागेको सुन्दा मन दङ भयो। खै कस्को लागी लेख्या भन्नु  । अब कसैको लागी भै देको भए यस्को लागी भनेर छाती फुकाएर भनिन्थ्यो होला। भावना को पोखरीमा डुबेर ति हरफहरु कोर्दा शायद ऐश्वर्या राइको तस्बिर आँखामा नाचिरको थ्यो क्यारे। अनी फेरी कबिता पढेर त्यस्तो कोही घायल भको खबर त मैले पाको छैन अहिले सम्म।