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Posted on 05-20-11 8:53 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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                पर्खाइ
तिमी आँफै रनभुल्लमा छौ
के नाच्नु म र के तिमी डम्फु बजाउछौ ।

कामना जती नै गरेनी टुङ्याएनौ तिमीले
एउटै कोठामा मैले संसार नियाल्न खोजे ।।

निरर्थक र औचित्यहिन त्यो दौडाहा
"नाच्न नजान्ने आँगन टेढो " भने जस्तै ।

समयले कसैलाई पर्खदैन
तरपनी म झिनो विश्वासको पर्खाइमा छु ।।  

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Nepal ko Neta haruko lagi ho yo lahare g. n thank u .
 
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नाइस ओन सिमी ।

सिनो भैसकेकाबाट् के झिनो आश गर्नु सिमी ? मखुला ?
 


 
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पर्खाईको नतिजा राम्रो होस भन्ने शुभकामना!

शीर्षक पनि राखेको भए हुन्थ्यो नि!


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राखे हजुरबा शीर्षक "पर्खाइ "हेहे
 
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 ओहो हाम्री सिमी पनि कबियत्री रइछिन था थेन 
खाली हेड्बेन लार मात्रा बस्ने भनेको त एस्तो गजब कबिता पनि फुर्ने रईछ 
राम्रो छ स्‍मृति कबिता। 
मैले त नेपाल को नेता हरु लाई भन्दा नि तिमी ले आँफैले रोजेको नेता को लागि हो कि भन्ठानेको

 
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बिस्टे सर(बा)पनि जिस्काउनु हुन्छ
कबियत्री भन्दा नि प्रयासयात्री चाँही होला
धन्यवाद लहरेकान्त जि ,लिली, ठुल्बा ,हजुबा, बिस्टे बा
 
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NICE ONE.. Hidden Talent
 
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Superb ! Sajha got talent ;)
 
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साझाले के पायो साझालाई नै सोध्नु पर्छ ।
तर मैले बैरे सर एन्ड रिठ्ठे सानको
कम्मेन्ट पाए त्यस्कोलागी धन्यवाद ।  

 
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 तर धेरै पर्खन चै हुन्न नि . 
 
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Sarai ramro lagyo smritiji
 
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ओहो स्र्मिती जि को घोच्पेच वाला कबिता त साह्रै घच्ची को छ है
हुन त ति खन्चुवा हरु  जती घोछे पनि बिउँझीदैनन  

 
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hoina yo simi ni kaile dekhi kabiyetri bhaye chha bai.......la je hosh ramro kabitako lagi dhanyobad.................

 
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 simi nani ramro kabita ko lagi sadhubaad!
 
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रामु ब्रो:-पर्खाईर्को पिडा बुझेकोमा धन्यबाद |

दुखे जी :-धन्यबाद छ मेरो प्रयासलाई मन पराइदिनु भएकोमा |

तिमी मेरो साथी :-जति नै घोचे नि खन्चुवाहरु बिउझिदैनन के गर्नु है |

स्पोके:-यतिका दिन सम्म कहा हराएका थियौ, ल धन्यबादको लागि वेलकम |

जिते सर :-धेरै धेरै स्वागत छ |
तपाईहरुको
comment  म सम्हालेर राख्ने छु |


 


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